Travel Essay
I swear this is the longest car ride of my life... especially since I am stuck in the back seat of my Grandmother's van with my mom. Of course, we had to take the back roads instead of the interstate because everyone wanted to see the "scenery." The "scenery" is actually just a bunch of crappy houses and run-down farms strewn out here and there. We have been on the road for only two hours and I am already wanting to die.. ten more hours to go.
Works fine for an outline--how about some details and some narrative snap in your rewrite?
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